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Spelling in manual (8008)

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asked Oct 3, 2014 in Closed bug by albert (3,520 points)
recategorized Jun 30, 2018 by albert
Thank you for the new manual (version 8008) I browsed through the pdf version and found the following problems:
- page 28: image to wide
- page 92: image / table to wide
- page 94: image / table to wide

Errors shown by spelling checker (English-US; some words might be valid in English-UK spelling):
- page 3: multilines -> multi-line (or maybe multiple lines)
  - page 8/9: You can have multilines note using the end note keywords. -> You can have a multi-line note using the end note keywords.
- page 6/45: optionnaly -> optionally
- page 10: formated -> formatted
- page 11/51: Initialisation -> Initialization
- page 15: denotate -> denote
- page 16: formating -> formatting
- page 17: 1.25 Participants englober -> ?
- page 17: arround -> around
- page 17: ...or a optional... -> ...or an optional...
- page 20: We will see latter than actor definitions ... -> We will see later that the actor definitions ...
- page 23/44/75: verticaly  -> vertically
- page 24/45/75/81: functionnality -> functionality
- page 25: behaviour  -> behavior
- page 28/29/47/48/85: Agregation -> Aggregation
  note: maybe the table on page 28 should be on the next line, like it is on page 85
- page 28/85: thoses  -> those
- page 33: crypted -> encrypted
- page 39/39: wich  -> which
- page 39: UNKOWNSTART -> ?
- page 39/39: UNKOWNEND -> ?
- page 40: usefull -> useful
- page 44/44: Studient -> Student
- page 50: ...a label on a arrow using... -> ....a label on an arrow using...
- page 51: Unfortunalty -> Unfortunately
- page 61: implicitely  -> implicitly
- page 62: graphviz -> Graphviz
- page 24/45/61/75/81: GraphViz -> Graphviz
  (consistency with their own web site)
- page 72: symbole -> symbol
- page 72: combinaisons -> combinations
- page 81: alse -> also
- page 87: keywork -> keyword
- page 89: speciale -> special
- page 90: legagy -> legacy
- page 95/99: dependant -> dependent

There is always a discussion about grey and gray in respect to colors. In the table on page 101 most colors are defined as "gray" except "LightGrey". Also on page 83 the color "grey" is used. Is this correct?

I still have to have a look if all images are correct.

 

Albert

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answered Oct 3, 2014 by plantuml (295,000 points)
selected Jun 29, 2018 by albert
 
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Hello,

Many thanks for your feedbacks!

We have corrected all those errors, except the table being to large in page 94 (even the shift of images), and upload the last version.

Sounds better ?

Thanks again!
commented Oct 5, 2014 by albert (3,520 points)
Thank you for the new manual (the update version 8008) I browsed through the pdf version and found some problems:

Errors shown by spelling checker (English-US):
- page 9: You can have multilines note using the end note keywords. -> You can have a multi-line note using the end note keywords.
- page 97/101: dependant -> dependent


Albert
commented Oct 6, 2014 by plantuml (295,000 points)
We've just upload a corrected version! Please go on if you have remarks (even if it looks like an endless process :-)
commented Dec 4, 2014 by anonymous
Hi,
When you upload an updated reference manual, please add a timestamp or revision.
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